docs: improve wording for the dev guide

Wording tweak suggested by David Jorm, author of the libvirt App Dev Guide.
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Justin Clift 2010-09-13 17:28:49 +10:00
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<h1>libvirt Application Development Guide</h1>
<p>
This is both a guide to developing with libvirt, and a useful
reference document. It is a work in progress, contributed to by the
members of the libvirt team and being authored by a professional
author.
The guide is both a learning tool for developing with libvirt and an
API reference document. It is a work in progress, composed by a
professional author from contributions written by members of the
libvirt team.
</p>
<p>
Contributors to this are <b>VERY</b> welcome, so if you'd like to
get your name in this and demonstrate your virtualisation prowess,
contributing solidly to the content here will do it. :)
Contributions to the guide are <b>VERY</b> welcome. If you'd like to get
your name on this and demonstrate your virtualisation prowess, a solid
contribution to the content here will do it. :)
</p>
<h2>Browsable online</h2>

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<h1>libvirt Application Development Guide</h1>
<p>
This is both a guide to developing with libvirt, and a useful
reference document. It is a work in progress, contributed to by the
members of the libvirt team and being authored by a professional
author.
The guide is both a learning tool for developing with libvirt and an
API reference document. It is a work in progress, composed by a
professional author from contributions written by members of the
libvirt team.
</p>
<p>
Contributors to this are <b>VERY</b> welcome, so if you'd like to
get your name in this and demonstrate your virtualisation prowess,
contributing solidly to the content here will do it. :)
Contributions to the guide are <b>VERY</b> welcome. If you'd like to get
your name on this and demonstrate your virtualisation prowess, a solid
contribution to the content here will do it. :)
</p>
<h2>Downloadable PDF</h2>